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The Ear Implant Foundation's avatar

This story really takes off in the second part. The idea of an underground movement taking unauthorized control of the mutation technology takes the plot into an interesting direction.

Gil Nobodi's avatar

Thanks, things will only get worse from here! šŸ™†ā€ā™‚ļø

Matthew E Meurer's avatar

The tension you keep in your stories through withholding information are always great; I'll definitely be reading part three.

M.O.Stewart Writes Dark Stuff's avatar

I’m enjoying how you give us enough to understand the general world while simultaneously keeping us in the dark along with Audrey.

Gil Nobodi's avatar

Thanks! part 2 was definitely meant to raise ALL the questions.

Mac Sitko's avatar

Stuff’s mutating again! There’s a razor-thin line between spectacle and violence here, and Audrey is genuinely intelligent and dangerous. Nice.